Some thoughts on Remembrance Day

Missing in ActionTat 

the telegram came

I fell to my knees

my sister says

I don’t remember any of it

something bone china

in me cracked

like the set you sent me for Christmas

from England

now I can no longer pour hot tea

into that translucent cup


I bought dresses

went to dances

wept nights empty

watched day dawn

dashed to the dress shop

half-believed another telegram

would one day arrive


Previous telegram mistake


Private Marcel injured but alive


Discovered disoriented but well

Returning May 1944


Sends his love


No such message ever arrives

I carry on this smalltown existence

shopping selling

eating dancing

weeping grieving




from How the Light is Spent (Wintergreen Press 2013)  ©Gail Sidonie Sobat

Some interesting articles to consider this Remembrance Day: 


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This week’s great un-/ undersung CanLit title worth checking out:

The Perilous Realm Series: The Shadow of Malabron, The Fathomless Fire, The Tree of StoryThomas Wharton – Wharton’s trilogy tells the story of a boy from our world who stumbles upon the Perilous Realm, the world that stories come from. With a group of friends that includes a girl with the power to shape stories, and a talking wolf who might turn out to be a bloodthirsty killer, the boy must struggle against a single dark and powerful Story that threatens to consume all others. Protagonist Will “he (and Wharton, for that matter) absolutely revels in the magic of the Realm.” – (Globe & Mail)


Writing Quote: “My own feeling is that civilization ended in World War I, and we’re still trying to recover from that,” he said. “Much of the blame is the malarkey that artists have created to glorify war, which as we all know, is nonsense, and a good deal worse than that — romantic pictures of battle, and of the dead and men in uniform and all that. And I did not want to have that story told again.” – Kurt Vonnegut Jr., American author (1922-2007)

Writing Tips:  “Be a Sadist. No matter how sweet and innocent your leading characters, make awful things happen to them-in order that the reader may see what they are made of.” — Kurt Vonnegut Jr.

Writing Prompt: “Start as close to the end as possible.” – Kurt Vonnegut Jr.

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